Week 10 - Feedback from Interim Presentation

Kamps (2009)

Feedback Straight After Presentation

- Unsure of spatial arrangements

- Some programs are not as strong, for example "survival of the fittest", can see the reasoning
but doesn't integrate with core parameters or metaphor. Something big in scale.. for example, mangroves... maybe an analysis of the mangroves

- Children's play space with the movable train, good idea with the different drop-offs offering different activities, but may want to move to an outdoor setting.

If outdoor, consider 

weather/shelter/shading for during the day, 

how are you going to keep the children in the specific area? Supervision?
     consider safety,

- Consider the spaces must serve a purpose, not just there for the sake of being there. ie, screening room.. what do the kids learn? how to integrate a learning experience?

- Mass model not effective (colors confusing, color association not strongly shown)

- Masterplan: ferry shouldn't extrude so far into the river.